Truly an amazing game, and I can tell a lot of effort was put into it! I feel bad for having an critism at all since I value writing a lot in stories and it was done perfectly well here, though I couldn't get fully engaged in the story because of how the text was laid out.
I'm diagnosed with ADHD and reading chunks of texts is especially a struggle for me, so visual novels that include animations on the words are better at keeping my attention so that I can go one phrase at a time. I just wanted to put this out there as a small warning for people with similar problems, but once again I have to emphasis that was literally the ONLY issue I had with it, so I still highly recommend it!!
I'll try to find a playthrough since I really wanna know all the other endings without spending an eternity reading every line lol
This game lives rent free in my head even after a few years. Yiestol got me messed up, but Nyargh healed my soul. Fantastic game with such a solid world.
I found this game years ago, and I still think about it to this day. It's given me my love for the horror genre, and I'm still finding something to fill the visual novel shaped hole in my chest.
this game was so amazing in it's worldbuilding and lore and characters considering it's runtime!!! nyargh's my fave (and he deserves more love in my humble opinion) but truly, my ultimate love is just the world this takes place in. the worldbuilding and exposition is done so naturally, a shining example of a perfect balance of "show not tell" while also not being too obtuse!!!
the details of the salt, the punishments, the fleshfields... oh what i'd give to read an entire novel written in this world. thank you for the wonderful game!
I truly adored this. I found the narrative flowed so smoothly, not loredumping me, but still giving me enough information to get to know the world from the available information alongside context. I think it did a superb job at that. The love interests were so great, I wish I could have had more time with them before their "big decisions" (out of pure selfishness, ha).
I liked the bittersweet aspect of Yiestol's and Brattan's routes, especially the latter. All three routes were very sweet, beautiful and romantic in their own way, this was a really nice experience, and I am so glad I picked this up ٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و ♡
I played through Yiestol's ending. I'm pretty sure playing this changed me fundamentally in some way. Liquid gold drips from the pen that you wield. Thank you.
Played this game for the first time recently after watching your guys 'Visual Novel Development For Beginners' talk. - It was sooo good I had to check out your games.
The worldbuilding in this game is insane and I feel incredibly teased with its short but sweet runtime.
The characters are likeable and intriguing, each ending reveals more about the world. (I am yet to achieve Nyarghs ending-- will update this when I do, currently at a cafe and I'll further out myself as a monster fucker)
Amazed that the music was not custom commissioned, it fits the setting and the illustrations perfectly. - Looking through the guys website was an adventure in itself -
Overall I'm now gonna be thinking about this world non-stop, and fanart will be made in the coming months.
Great work, and I look forward to playing your other games!!
Yiestol's ending made me feel whole (ha-ha,) it was by far my favorite ending. It's really romantic I think, to love someone so much that you'd desire to become one so completely. Brattan's ending to me was bittersweet. I don't know, it felt sort of like something was lost in a way? But Vil gained a very sweet and loyal wolf man, so I can't complain. Nyargh's story felt the most relatable. He really is sweet, I love my tentacle monster fella. I want to help him take care of bees for the rest of our lives.
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Truly an amazing game, and I can tell a lot of effort was put into it! I feel bad for having an critism at all since I value writing a lot in stories and it was done perfectly well here, though I couldn't get fully engaged in the story because of how the text was laid out.
I'm diagnosed with ADHD and reading chunks of texts is especially a struggle for me, so visual novels that include animations on the words are better at keeping my attention so that I can go one phrase at a time.
I just wanted to put this out there as a small warning for people with similar problems, but once again I have to emphasis that was literally the ONLY issue I had with it, so I still highly recommend it!!
I'll try to find a playthrough since I really wanna know all the other endings without spending an eternity reading every line lol
This game lives rent free in my head even after a few years. Yiestol got me messed up, but Nyargh healed my soul. Fantastic game with such a solid world.
I found this game years ago, and I still think about it to this day. It's given me my love for the horror genre, and I'm still finding something to fill the visual novel shaped hole in my chest.
this game was so amazing in it's worldbuilding and lore and characters considering it's runtime!!! nyargh's my fave (and he deserves more love in my humble opinion) but truly, my ultimate love is just the world this takes place in. the worldbuilding and exposition is done so naturally, a shining example of a perfect balance of "show not tell" while also not being too obtuse!!!
the details of the salt, the punishments, the fleshfields... oh what i'd give to read an entire novel written in this world. thank you for the wonderful game!
I truly adored this. I found the narrative flowed so smoothly, not loredumping me, but still giving me enough information to get to know the world from the available information alongside context. I think it did a superb job at that. The love interests were so great, I wish I could have had more time with them before their "big decisions" (out of pure selfishness, ha).
I liked the bittersweet aspect of Yiestol's and Brattan's routes, especially the latter. All three routes were very sweet, beautiful and romantic in their own way, this was a really nice experience, and I am so glad I picked this up ٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و ♡
I eh love this game(Yiestol best boy)
I played through Yiestol's ending. I'm pretty sure playing this changed me fundamentally in some way. Liquid gold drips from the pen that you wield. Thank you.
i absolutely love this, i did yiestol's ending and tbh it was so sweet and romantic, also the art was beautiful and i adore him
Played this game for the first time recently after watching your guys 'Visual Novel Development For Beginners' talk. - It was sooo good I had to check out your games.
The worldbuilding in this game is insane and I feel incredibly teased with its short but sweet runtime.
The characters are likeable and intriguing, each ending reveals more about the world. (I am yet to achieve Nyarghs ending-- will update this when I do, currently at a cafe and I'll further out myself as a monster fucker)
Amazed that the music was not custom commissioned, it fits the setting and the illustrations perfectly. - Looking through the guys website was an adventure in itself -
Overall I'm now gonna be thinking about this world non-stop, and fanart will be made in the coming months.
Great work, and I look forward to playing your other games!!
10 out of 10!!
character design and worldbuilding in this is insane, i love nyargh and his bees.
this game is so unbelievably charming and freaky and fun i love it so much
The worldbuilding and characters are fantastic.
Yiestol's ending made me feel whole (ha-ha,) it was by far my favorite ending. It's really romantic I think, to love someone so much that you'd desire to become one so completely. Brattan's ending to me was bittersweet. I don't know, it felt sort of like something was lost in a way? But Vil gained a very sweet and loyal wolf man, so I can't complain. Nyargh's story felt the most relatable. He really is sweet, I love my tentacle monster fella. I want to help him take care of bees for the rest of our lives.